How has money and drugs affected the world today?
1. Subject-verb agreement
2. What does this have to do with LA?
To broad and general.
use a better verb
How does research benefit students?
how does the effect of the mexican drug war negatively influence children?
Questions start with capital letters
It sounds too specific, not enough room to to become stronger
How do cartels help shape the Mexican Drug trade?
better subject verb agreement and a stronger verb kam
What do you mean by "shape?"
cartels should be capitalized because it is a pronoun
work on the wording and its a tad bit vague
Be more specific, the wording is vague
What about....... How do cartels help complete the Mexican Drug War?
how does cartels help influence the mexican drug war?
What do you mean by "complete?"
How does new life on the Galapagos Islands benefit the ecosystem?
what is this life you speak of?
Animal life and Plant life
ok say that
How does the Mexican Drug war affect The United States?
Good question Pat. Keep it up
You shouldn't focus on the US
use a stronger verb boy
How did the society and warfare of the Aztecs and the Greeks differ?
What do you mean by society? Is not the military part of society? Work on the wording, Jonah.
thanks Ms. Feldman.
Differ from what?
differ from each other
Re-phrase the question. It does not flow correctly.
How did Brazilian dance evolve? Or How does Brazilian dance contribute to Brazilian culture?
Like the second one more
I like the second question but what are you trying to focus on in the culture
1st is the worst
2nd is the best
Kayla im trying to focus on the Dance
How does violence in the Mexican drug war hurt the Mexican society?
Don't use the word "hurt" use a more stronger word...... how about damage or weaken
Be a little more general, too small
What do you mean society? Economy? Individuals
Society as a WHOLE
How is Lance Armstrong's legacy similar to that of Columbus'?
Restate the question and make it more clear
Whats the idea/ topic of the legacy?
Nice question peer. :))
needs a good verb to compare the 2 people
How are you focusing on LA?
Re-phrase, too confusing and too genral
In what way do i Re-phrase
Where did Lance Armstrong come from?
How does the drug war between the Mexican cartels affect the citizens of mexico?
Its effect not affect
but you knew what i ment.....
i already wrote that Juan
i believe a second opinion is good
No, affect is correct here. However, I think you can use a stronger verb.
can you please give me an example?
How does the drug trade negatively affect society in Mexico?
I think you should be more specific when you say society
you mean like jobs, kids, adults ?
society seems good
I totally agree with Antonio! What do you mean by society?
no like does it affect economy or jobs
use a stronger word than effect
Use a stronger word than "negatively affect" and its effect.
How do cartels accelerate crime in Brazil?
Accelerate implies speed, but do you also mean frequency and magnitude? If so, you might want consider adding/changing verbs.
How did Castro destroy Cubian life and Cuba it self
more specific focus on one thing
that is too broad when you say Cuba, and get specific in Cuban life.
What do you mean peer Wade ???
use a specific aspect of Cuban life...ok
Will you be describing the effects or just stating his destruction
you need a question
Or....... How does the Mexican Drug trade benefit the Mexican economy?
I am stuck on what question to use.
How does Latin American soccer differ from American soccer?
How did soccer originate in Latin America?
id say how does soccer in latin america influence society or something along those lines.
but the second one is better if i had to choose
i think i will go with how did soccer influence the latin american society
You should choice: Which ever one you have more evidence for, and the one that you believe you can explain better.
How does gender roles destroy the education system in Brazil and the Caribbean?
I think it should be "how did" and You shouldn't focus on the Carribbean
Okay, so just focus on Brazil
nice question, but it must be arguable.
How does the drug wars harm society?
There are many drug wars, be specific..
I agree with Nate and your grammar is incorrect
i agree with nathan
Yesh i do agree ;)
How does gender roles effect the people of Brazil?
try to be more clear like maybe how does it affect everyday life or something
how has the cultural dances of Latin America influence people over time?
be a little broader like i think that might be a little too specific
ok ill work on it
How did the Guatemalan civil war and genocide hurt Guatemala as a country today?
how did the civil war and the Guatemalan genocide affect Guatemala as a country?
questions start with capital letters Catherine
lol it was just a draft bridget calm down
idk if my topic is ok
whats the topic
shoe cultrure and how the hype effects how the government is controlling its ppl
I don't understand your topic
its n interesting topic and id love to read this but it might not have a lot of evidence to support your topic
How did Efrain Rios Montt impact the Guatemalan genoicde?
I don't think this is arguable and I think you're going to struggle to write 5 pages
state a specific argument in your question
who is efrain rios montt???
How has the Mexican Drug War impacted Mexican citizens?
How did ....(Then The Question)
How did the act of slavery affect Brazilian ethnicity?
Are you talking about language? Explain how it would affect ethnicity
wording is a little confusing .... how did affect Brazilians as people ?
How has the traditional dressing in Latin America changed overtime and what does it symbolize?
I think you should say dress instead of dressing
Stick to one topic and in which time period would you be writing about?
you need to be more specific about one thing, shrink your focus
How does the Cartels benefit the drug war
forgot to put question mark
what drug war hmmm?
How does the way the government controls its people effect the hype of sneakers in Latin America?
This is too specific. Be more general
Use your real name Please
are you sure you can write an essay on this?
this doesn't really make sense to me, the government doesnt control shoe buisnesses..
The government controls whether u can camp out for shoes or not because u are on their property
Is this really an important topic? use a different word than hype too.
You might wanna change the word hype.
can you really write 5 pages on government controlling sneakers worn?
Umm I think the "sneaker hype" idea is irrelevant
What do you mean by "hype?"
People don't camp in Latin America they have connects
How does the experience of the Guatemalan genocide influence everyday life in Guatemala currently?
Influence is just a starter verb
what life are you talking about
Guatemalan life Juan
all people say is "use a stronger verb" -.-
use a stronger verb
ok thanks for the advice good sir :)
How do cartels help supplement the Mexican Drug War?
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